Comments on E is for Existential by THX 0477

Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

I wish we came across a minority guy? now that is funny.. yeah thats funny..
great story dr tim.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

lots of thinking here, and witty thoughts too. Is this a time to be witty? I don’t know. I’d be thinking, “man, i can’t run! Ouch my legs, my lungs!”
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Krulltar

Good sequel, but switching from the 3rd person in the prequels to the 1st person in this sequel threw me off at first.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
THX 0477

Doh, my apologies. I got carried away with all the internal thoughts and full-on switched to first person. Thanks for calling me on it, Krulltar. Should I go in and edit or just leave it?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Krulltar

leave it, since I’m the only one who noticed.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Matt McCray

Nice! Trying to add some action to the story, eh?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Chakatreamentinnahouse (LoA) Fool

I read thios is first and LOVED it…I find that I’m always thinking of really inappropriate stuff when being chased by zombies. I love the realizations he has in mid flight “Sheesh, not too bright, is she”, I always stat with that one….great story
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5