Comments on The Adventures of Marty Martinson, part four, Know thy Enemy. by Max Sterling

Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

ok this is more like it now we mught get alien zombie robots? hehehe
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

A bit rough at the start somehow, but it by 1/4 of the way in you seemed to find the right pace and feel to it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Max Sterling

@might-joe, ha, I’m thinking no zombies, or aliens, or robots, at least not in the US of A, now what could I mean by that ;)

@THX0477, Yeah, I was thinking that it might help to provide a recap, but these stories are so short I think from here on, I’m only gonna reference stuff in story. The blurb at the beginning idea, is as you accurately pointed out a bit rough.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

yeah don’t need a recap if you’re reading the series, besides, ficly is short on space!

I like that the moustache shaved off is SO different, like when the girl takes off her glasses suddenly she’s hot. lol!

And the back exit? awesome! an escape for more story. :)
- Posted over 10 years ago.