alert the ship!
nice action here. :)
the armor and the mind connection is really cool.

Hmm i may have to borrow that idea sometime.

Hmm i may have to borrow that idea sometime.

@radical, ha, if my idea’s can give others ideas (which will probably be better anyway) I can’t think of a higher form of flattery.

@ElshaHawk, thanks first person action seems easier for me, than third person action, isn’t that weird?

I think you meant “lunges” not “lungs”. Somewhat of plain sci-fi plotline so far, BUT your writing style keeps me wanting to read more. Great job.

@Krulltar, dude, I should have caught that, talk about taking a reader out of it… “He What’s at him?”, thanks for the catch, fixed.