Lara, I love this… the last two lines in the first stanza are stunning.
trying to hide her anger, angry thundercloud steps, in sensibility.. yes the last two lines of the first stanza are great.
you are making me cry again!
viva shoe poems I say. There should be a challenge.
here you go http://ficly.com/challenges/282
Lovely and delightfully quirkly little poem. I’m not sure I followed it all, but I’m not a shoe afficianado (which I have likely misspelled).
Aurelia
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)
Coccinella
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)
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