Comments on Detective Young by ElshaHawk (LoA)

The Fantastic Mister Fish

gah
i likes it
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

this was nice elsha real nice
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Raegan Dauterive

This is great, I love how it’s reminiscent of those old detective shows from the 40s. I always thought they came up with the best metaphors.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wyatt Aapr LoA

Hahahaha I love it. This takes me back to the writings of Richard Prather, and his character Shell Scott, and Mickey Spillane and his character Mike Hammer. Straight out of the 50’s.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wyatt Aapr LoA

Oh, I forgot all the girls were called dames back then.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ethelthefrog

Oh, superb.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
blusparrow (LoA)

wow elsh =). the character is so her
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

I tried to capture the “in character” Jesi, the one that she would play. I don’t think I have the dialogue right…
- Posted over 10 years ago.