Bizarre but told in such a straight-forward manner it sort of dares the reader to pass judgement. Neat job on that. Cute bit of a pun at the end too, about the ‘dirty habit’.

This is awful and wonderful at the same time. I love the description of the congregation.

LOL!!! Great dirty habit pun!!!

Heh, at first I assumed it was gonna just be something like he was always naked under the robe, but then the stench wafted through. Nice entry.

ugh, that is so gross. And not obvious. Nicely done.

i love the word sussurate. the dirty habit pun just makes this piece awesome

and this is one of the reasons I like the Baptists…

Ack so gross! Good story, I feel bad for his congregation.

HAH! I love a good pun, especially when it’s taken to this degree.

Maybe somebody could baptize him? ;-)

Heresy of water?

Ummm… John the Baptist, you know the guy who Baptized Jesus? He did it in the river Jordan. Water probably the most sacred physical thing in all Christianity.

That said, well told.