hmmm. a tad less interesting than the last, but keep writing! i want to know where this is going.

well this is leading up to the awsome part 3!

I know it’s picky but…

In between putting on his jeans and discovering his parents making breakfast he was touching wood. What wood? A table top? A stair rail? It has a smooth surface but also has ridges? Doesn’t that negate the smoothness of the wood?

With regard to spell check and the like, I have always found that by writing in Word or some other word processing program I can get a character count and spell check done as I write. True the character count can be off by a little when ficly counts them, but it is usually pretty close. And you should beware of sentences that just run on and on and never quite seem to stop even when they change subjects like the time I was out in a field and this rabbit came running past me and I looked up and thought wow what is he running from when I heard this growl behind me and this big bear was chasing the rabbit and throwing a roll of toilet paper at it, but it wasn’t Charmin Ultra soft so i guess the commercials aren’t always accurate, but i dirgess.

thanks for pointing out that mistake fixed now

Not entirely sure how a smirk could be loud. Smirks are watered-down smiles, aren’t they?

Oh, and you were misinformed. I turned 13 in August.

this is quite a twist from the nightmare in the first episode..
I’m not even going to play grammar police..
one question, how’d his mom get his blankets washed so fast? superwoman!

oh she washed them while he was asleep

oh she washed them while he was asleep