…and if it wasn’t a crowded movie theater, maybe something would’ve happened to make this story worthy of a mature tag lol.

yeah, i agree! but you can still kiss in the movie theater.. mhm.

four pencils cuz you could have added just a tiny bit more.. this was so sweet and tender.

The scenario is unique, but I’m not sure if we’re supposed to be wondering why or how at that moment with a hand on your cheek that you knew you were loved. It seems like you’re selling the idea of something so simple as a hand gesture messages real love, and that’s great, but unless I know why you don’t feel love, or realized at that moment you DO feel loved, the message isn’t entirely received.

Maybe some simple metaphor of how the gesture was received without getting wordy with a backstory. I dunno, it’s a good idea though.

aaaaawwwwww, this is awesome!

It’s sort of like when you already know deep down that you are loved, but a gesture just cements it and you know positively.

This is an emotional piece, Twyst, not a rational one.

Obviously, I wasn’t saying it should be. I was saying that I want MORE emotion, I offered a suggestion of a contrast of sorts, to enhance the emotions present. I think the emotion is there, but it’s too subtle.

awwwwwww <3