I hope I didn’t violate the contest rules – this is what I thought of while listening to “If I laugh”.

This reminds me of a little kids book. Maybe you should write one!

I pictured teaser as a clown that just lost his job and home, making a new friend on the street.

this is cute, can’t go wrong with cats lol

Good story. IMHO, it only comes across as a childs story because of the last line. “And from then on, Teaser and the Firecat were the best of pals.” gives it childlike happy ending. I think the whole last line can be removed, and it would help the story.

and if anyone is interested here is the image and song she wrote about…

http://www.amazon.com/If-I-Laugh/dp/B000W0CXMG

Maybe I will take off the last line…what can I say, it just popped in there!

Cute little beginning to an adventure tale. Felt a bit like the the names popped in abruptly, but the character limit will do that.