Well done. I like it.

awww! that’s so sad. :(

Very beautiful and sad!

Very sweet moment, and a nice job capturing that sort of quiet and pragmatic acceptance some people seem to find for death.

My sentiments echo those above me.

One thing that sucks about death is all the books I’ll never get to write or read. I was thinking about that one night while I tried to sleep and got this idea. After ten minutes or so, I had the entire story written in my head, so I got up and typed it up. Funny how that works.

oh wow! that is what I said when I got to the end….and again….oh wow.