The adventures summarized in this ficlet are grand and many, but in a different place and different form, for different people. This a personal continuation of those stories, and to the two people on this site who are familiar with them, I’d like to note that this is completely non-canon.

This is badass. I think the macro scale of whatever smaller adventures you’re talking about couldn’t be as good or as original as this perspective.

I think you could lose the bold on hated though, no need to force it.

I really liked the last bit, and I think it could have stood alone with a more focused set-up. Still, I get that this is part of something larger, something that sounds like a pet project. The first paragraph could have been a bit stronger without the fact that they died repeated.

Aww, memories. Good times. :]

Ack, THX, where would my stories be without you? Still here, but worse off, I suppose. Anywho- thanks for pointing out the flaws there, both of you. Corrected and sexified.