Sequel imminent

Pretty awesome. Looking forward to sequel!

Turns out I needed two sequels… I suspect I overdid it, but I guess I get too excited reminiscing about the Glory Days. To be honest, I don’t expect this to be too well-received – I wrote this one for me.

If you do enjoy it enough to read, I’d love to hear if you think the quality of the writing goes down or up from entry 1-3. I felt rushed as I went on because I started realizing how late it was getting, so maybe the writing gets sloppy or maybe it gets better because I didn’t think about it as much and so left some of my usual over-descriptive style out.

Very fun, especially since I’ve watched more football in the last weekend than I have in a long while. Nice job with the tight focus.

Not a football fan (or one who understands it really), but I was able to follow fairly well.

I love that the bruise was donated by the opponent. I’ve known sidewalks that made similar donations.