Very exciting. I wouldn’t say the writing quality changes here, but the focus is more football-centric, making it a little harder to follow for a non-sporty guy like me. Not a bad thing, just an observation.

Ditto THX’s comment. This has less story narrative – in a novel or longer-than-ficly short story it’d be an amply passable section of descriptive prose, and very exciting. Still gonna go on and read the ending though :-)

Ditto THX & Coccinella.

I think this part was very descriptive, but I still don’t really understand what happened.