This reminds me of Payless, maybe from the display’s point of view. “Look at me!” And I look, oh yeah, and I may even drool, and I may even point them out to my hubby, but I may not have the money the shoe thinks I do.. sigh.

Haha I feel the same way execpt its my dad I point them out to and cross my fingers he buys them

this is super cute, it sort of makes me think of a jingle. I really like the overall flow of this poem :)