Wow. nothing more. Just wow.

awesome i like how you describe it by describing whats not there

oh i know that shaky, post-adrenaline surge!
This makes a great stand alone ficly as well. You don’t even have to know his profession to enjoy this.
what a ride!

Good stuff! Even without the prequel, I liked it.

Damn, wtf!? That’s a serious mindf*ck there!

Whoa, nicely told. Great job on the slow-down moment there with the gun. Thanks for sharing the moment with us.

Rather good you didn’t have time to pull your gun, then. Might’ve hurt the stupid-ass kid.