This one received A LOT of comments, simply because it was so evil.

It was a ficlet responding to the “Diabolical Challenge”.

“Oh, and Riley! Call your sister. I haven’t seen her leave her room in a while.”

Kids start so young these days.
Girlfriends by 10.
Kidnapped victims by 12,
Mayor by 20.

(100th comment, woot)

hahaha… It’s funny cuz it’s true..

Ick and disturbing, especially since I was imagining him as a crusty, skeezy old guy. Great description from this sick individual’s perspective.

This was very hard to read, but at the same time very well-written. The ending was a shock! I’d say I prefer this one of the two stories you entered for this challenge.

yeah i remember how disgusted I was, how shocked, at the evil genius behind this!

ya… this one was by far one of the more controversial stories I’d entered.
It was meant to be evil, and disturbing.

This bit particularly stuck out in my mind the first time around when you entered it in my Diabolically Villainous challenge (I think I recognized it for one of the best “evil child” bits… I had to do catagories, there was just so much evil in that challenge!). Made me shudder then, twists my stomach now.