lol the last part makes me smile

yes that is what i was thinking too. awesome!
though the storm obeying her gives this added power to the little hellion.. lol.

Lovely poetic continuation of the story. Love the psychological depth here as well. Nicely done adding on to her content but using a different style.

I wanted to write about the girl’s motivation in beheading the doll.
I wanted it to be a shocker ( originally, I was going for
Now that her father’s gone, they can no longer afford dresses.
She wants her dress. And they both can’t have it.
“But… it doesn’t fit you.” her mother tried to dissuade her, upon learning why she was out the night before.
That does not matter.)
But, that would have spoiled the cool mood of Elsha’s work.

So, yeah.
Thanks for the comments. :D
Highly appreciated.

this is super-good!!

really good sequel. second stanza/paragraph is particularly good.

Nice imagery.