very nice build up and execution.

part of me wants to see a sequel where we find out det. campbell is buggering young ms. padilla, too

I like to go for the almost Twilight Zoney twist ending :D

That Detective Campbell, what a bad man! Was definitely not expecting that twist.

I like the contrast of perspective between the two stories.

I almost think the Detective knows more because of what he is not saying. Good job!

Detective’s a little creep.

Reading on…

lol! nice inner thoughts! I have to catch up in this series..