oh, an old man with an eerie sense of humor.. not sure if I like him or not.. and the building is quite imposing and ominous, great job describing it!

I love the last line. Nice beginning.

…Also I’m now naming my firstborn Angus Swift.

You made a fair point in the forum about readers who peek in but don’t comment or rate. I obviously liked the stories enough to sequel, but hadn’t given you any pencils. This is a promising beginning with a good blend of potential and detail.

I was just going to repeat what Stovohobo wrote, word for word. Good job on coming up with that name, I’m hoping the character lives up to it!

Any story which starts out with an enigmatic setting like this and a character declaring his full name is begging for continuation. Great start.

One thing – the second sentence seems off. Perhaps it should start with “The…?”