Ooh, a drak room with light.
The irony! XD

No seriously, I hate horror stories, especially at night time ( as it is in my time zone), in the best possible way.
:D

love the story. i’ve always been a fan of the supernatural. and this is GOOD.
more sequels please. :D

Interesting paradoxical detail, that a light behind the door signifies the dark room. Taught and exciting, though his monologue was the one part that went a bit long.

THX: I’m agree with you.. but the way I see Leo is like that Coke-Headed freaky salesman guy in Die Hard (the first movie). LIkes his lime-light and wordy…

that was one crazy dream! i had to read it all before I could comment, riveting tale! The name Lara Brown sounds like a historical witch name, and the reporter is a great antagonist, trying so hard to be fearless. I guess what was behind the door was too scary for you, because you woke up! Dreams are so crazy real, its hard to put the emotion you feel into words, but i think you thrilled us all.

I’m sure the dream was scary, but in translation is just comes off as a bad Blair Witch/Containment rip off. You’re dreams are pretty cliche rofl.

it’s not finished…
And again… the dream was more about the girl and the dark place..

I guess, to Twyst’s point, the vehicle i chose was more cliche… but i can live with that.

oh its not done… oops my bad!

lol “jostle” was one of our vocab words in ninth grade english, awesome word. I like the supernaturalness of this story.