The camera panned? This is ridiculous rofl.

hehehe…
Oh well.. can’t please everyone i guess..

Well are you telling a story or are you telling a story about dream you viewed as a movie? It’s about the least dramatic thing you could do. I realize this was a dream, but if you’re not going to embellish and make it any better than in your mind this might as well just be a entry in your journal.

Man I really do suck!
I should go back to killing kittens. It’s what I did best back in the day!

But as you’ve said in other comments:
“Turns out everything is art whether you classify it as such or not.” ..
I guess by that definition, it’s still art, albeit, frumpy, cliché, and somewhat predictable art; but art none-the-less, that others who get that it is the aim of the story to be somewhat trite, have actually taken the time to enjoy.

But, we’ll all agree it’s Cliché and .. what’s the word? “Ridiculous”.

Glad you’re enjoying it…