nice one Elsha. Soft with a message.

Nice repetition there at the end. I thought the whole flower thing fit loosely as metaphor for anyone really.

exactly my point.

Lovely! Very reminiscent of the zen approach found in a lot of Japanese poetic materials.

(Itty bitty nit-pick: it’s = its)

thanks booth, fixed! it was just habit i guess to slip in the apostrophe…

I agree with Booth. ^^