Comments on Gliding through the City of Dreams by ethelthefrog

dkscully

o/~ Rebel, rebel… o/~

Interesting protagonist. Nice scene setting, and emotional content.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
The Fantastic Mister Fish

very intriguing. I hope you continue this!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Ronnie

Hunh. Very creative! I thoroughly enjoyed that.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mirror

Definitely twisted. But maybe when you changed scenes you could swap tones, that may make it a little more interesting. That’s just my own opinion.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
uselessness

What an odd start to a story. Who is our protagonist? Why go to such lengths to conceal his/her sex and identity? Is this meant to be a sincere LGBT romance or is mischief afoot? Reading on for more…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
ethelthefrog

Note the challenge it was entered into.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
uselessness

Ah, I missed that part! Very cool.
- Posted over 10 years ago.