i thought it should have been longer and spokew of her virtue at the end so the reader would have had a change of emotion. but thats me welcome to ficly.

hate the game, not the player.

I somewhat agree with MJY. This is a wonderfully described character, but without narrator motivation, or character motivation, it reads more a character describtion at the beginning of a play, rather than a story. A sequel could fix this.

btw, WELCOME TO FICLY!

i know people like these all too well.
i love the analogies and similes. it made me chuckle. Welcome to ficly!

i know people like these all too well.
i love the analogies and similes. it made me chuckle. Welcome to ficly!

I think that description is enough. Love her or hate her, she is what she is. If you think it’s vile(if you’re a girl, you probably think its vile)or fantastic(if you like sluts, you love her)…whateves i love it.