this was so gross, offensive, horrid, and repulsive, that I’m utterly taken aback by the fact that I loved reading it. This was nowhere near being erotic, but was a great story about the awkwardness of the moment. This story was the cat’s pajamas.

I didn’t know X could be taken that way. Go figure. I learn something new everyday.

This story was awesome and i agree with krully in no way erotic, but it was just good. did you roll or was it not enough? just teasin i know its fiction. but seriously? just teasin again.heheh

Both stories were pretty decent by virtue of their outright boldness. I did feel like your use of descriptive words was sloppy enough to be downright confusing. “Copacetic”, “Sketchy” those two are good examples of this. They aren’t doing anything, at least I don’t know what they’re doing.

Overall though, bold and fascinating.

a very bold entrance, i liked the stories.
i fully agree with krulltar.

BOLD ENTRANCE hahahaahahaha!!! No , nothing’s worse than a sketchy enema…copacteic snow, would be snow that agrees with you, so maybe not so much. Great stories:)

it may or may not be fiction?