wow, great job throwing us into the future with the commons whose destiny it is to break out of the oppression!

ya.. lots of possibilities with this.. it was a great initial story arc, Elsha… i have some great ideas.
May post another to get the ball rolling – then see if anyone else will join in the fun.

Ooh, great job on the mystery and suspense. It really takes the whole idea to the next step, a generation or more later.

Thanks THX — great praise from both of you…
I really see so much for this story…

Reminds me a lot of “The Chrysalids” novel that i read in high school..

reminded me of Stargate, good work continuing the story