yup greatness, i remember this. :)

I like the tension in this piece. Maybe too many "zero"es in the last paragraph.

Eew. Brain splatter.

I remember this one. Nice work.

The phrasing in the last paragraph seems to be a combination of O’Brien and Hemingway, by the way.

I hate to admit it but, I’ve never read anything by O’Brien or Hemingway.