Hope Match doesn’t mind the sequel. I took the opportunity to hopefully redeem my own weak attempt at the challenge by doing a sequel with all one syllable words, this time with more than just simple sentences.

Lovely – the progression of time in contemplating love and loss is a powerful theme, and one you’ve done well to capture here. Bonus points for the single syllables!

This is really beautiful. The changing of the seasons does not feel rushed, and that’s a hard thing to pull off.

Wonderfully done; this sequel could easily stand alone in the challenge. This is just one example of your delicate and beautiul writing style that I love.