Good dialog. Just one edit though: last paragraph. Instead of “odds ones” it should be “odd ones”. too much plurality.
btw, “Pro Jec Tile”. It wasn’t even a good pun, so it just came across a bit lame, but I’ll over look it for now
Missed that type-o. Thanks.
I wasn’t going for a pun with the title. Just a one syllable words.
But I suppose it does read like a pun. I wanted to call it Projectile, but didn’t want to break the rules of the challenge.
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Stewart M. Matthews
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