well this was a disappointment.

lol.

Good story.

Nice tale, Jones. Loved it, wonderfully written. lol

Thank you one and all. I’m thinking about going professional.

EPIC!! A Masterpiece!

The imagery, the imagination.

The exposition and character development.

You just have to work on it being so verbose and more harshly edit.

proffessional writer? oh there’s no money in it. Let me suggest the wonderful carreer of bible salesman. Making money in the lord’s service. Or maybe prostitution, no lord but plenty of service. hehehehe

haha.