Very sad and has a sort of disjointed feel to it all, though it works in this setting, I think.

I agree with THX, it seems to work.

For some reason, this made me think of a young Michael Jackson. My mind makes odd connections that would be difficult for even Carl Jung to explain.

it’s okay, when i was writing this last bit i thought of michael/michael jackson… but disregarded it.

haha, i just studied carl jung in my personality class.