hey this is aq good short. It meets all the requirements.
leaves alot to the reader.
meets the stand alone test.
the only problem is you need a pic.
really a pic is important. i am taking away two pencils for no pic.

For my profile or of Janie? Janie’s would probably be more interesting.

nice pic PT

thank you for the pic, MYJ is sorta nutty when it comes to the pic thing…always talking about how it shows commitment by the writer.

now about your story… great open ended story. Leaves alot for the reader to explore. btw, the 2nd to last sentence is a bit of a run-on, and needs another comma somewhere between “carpet” and “Janie”

oh you totally need to add more to this! I’m seriously on the edge of my seat. What happened to her? I need to know! haha.
great start!