Oooo. I love it!

oh my god. this is pretty amazing.
it’s so neat… and just… every word you use just seems perfect where it is

It’s a superb piece. It captures your attention from the very first stanza.
“My name is Loss
place of birth, Pandora’s box.
I am the sibling of Sorrow.” Awesome work.

Wow im amazed this is amazing!!