Comments on Broken [poem] by Ana Cristina

Raegan Dauterive

This is pretty awesome, the words sound almost like lyrics from a song sung by some cool and authentically talented singer/songwriter :)
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Ana Cristina

Thanks, Raegan! Alas, I am neither an authentically talented singer nor songwriter…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
`spacetowrite

i like this. i agree, it sounds like song lyrics.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
PorcelainDollface

Absolutely beautiful.
This could,without a doubt, be a song <3
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mr. Reeses

I love this… you are still my favorite. Now I attempted to make a sequel to this, cause I wanted to see if I could do something of the sort. I hope you like it. You are an amazing writer, and I can feel the love of words you have!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
El Fe del Oro

This was lovely. I like the way you could make me empathize with the tone it gives off
- Posted over 9 years ago.