This is a quiet, yet nice piece.
My favorite part was, pencil to paper, feelings to world. because you are thinking that it is going to be feelings to words, and in that second of confusion, the meaning pops out.
I wish you would write more surrealist lines like these because i think it would appeal to your random fish brain.
good job fishy face.

i’m not sure who is disappointed, you or the person reading it? this is a quiet piece, yet very powerful, because it jumps on you suddenly like a pouncing lion with the pain and disappointment. and i guess writing this alone helped you feel like you did something to ease the pain, thus the sense of accomplishment.

this is a nice piece. powerful. but sad.

why sponge? lol
i like this one a lot