The only thing I’d fix is that Michael had already pulled her to her feet in a previous installment.

Otherwise … hmm, picking up on a vibe? :)

Fair enough. I went back through all the prequels to try to find out whether he had or not, but somehow missed the bit where he did. It works better with this fix anyway.

And vibe? Maybe. Or maybe Something Else. :)

And what school kid carries business cards, anyway? :)

Will look forward to seeing what you do with this.

arm candy. i like it!