This is based on a music video by adrianne gonzalez called “Burn Me Up.”

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zpDSljSnPgQ&feature=related

This is very interesting. Provocative. And the last line leaves room for a number of possible meanings. I don’t feel like I could write a sequel to it, but I hope someone else does.

Wow.

very interesting. i could see a couple doing this in real life.

Very real, heartfelt, with a sexily vague ending. Well written.

this doesnt seem like your normal style.it was good,sexy goodness but good. I didnt see the video though.

Kind of sad. Paints a bleak picture of relationships with tender strokes. Nicely done. Didn’t get the last line at all, but maybe I’m slow toda.