Third paragraph: “scraped at my” what?

Other than that: interesting continuation to Beale’s original post. And an interesting character. Makes the readers wonder what happened to him. Or her.

very interesting story and nice timing slowly revaling like that.

oy, thanks. i’ll fix that. should be scraped at me.

and mjy, thanks.

ok, I’m intrigued…
lol

haha, i shall have to write more. :)

I worked with gay teens in crisis for four years. I recognize this young person.

i wasn’t thinking of a gay character, but i can see where you’d get the idea.

Yeah, I get the idea you were talking about an anorexic cutter. From the keywords.

(Funny thing, though, I didn’t notice those keywords until I had my sequel all written. Ended up going back through and giving some things in it more space to be metaphorical if that was the way you or whoever follows me up wants to take it. Assuming you don’t just ignore me or something. :P )

haha, it’s okay. i’m trying to think of a good next chapter. :)