reminds me of that law and order:svu episode. where elliot has to go get the baby out of a meth house, the grandma waiting outside. the house blows up right as he’s coming out. (both a unharmed though) :)

@space, I saw that episode a few days ago! lol, but I thought it was Ice Cube’s character that got the baby out, because he felt he had to for the grandma, since he couldn’t find the baby’s mom before she died.

Anyway, this is an amazing sentence. Packed with suspense :)

oh right. * duh *
haha, i haven’t seen that ep in ages. forgive my forgetfulness.

Wasn’t thinking of SVU, only the previous sentences. But yes, I remember bits of that episode now. It was good.
Man, if I stole a story line it was unintentional.

Realized that I had messed up on the title.

Great, action-packed ending, though I thought the meth-house reference was a bit jarring. The first two bits worked just fine being vague, and I think that could have continued.

oh nice ending!

p.s. That’s Ice T on SVU…says white girl a to white girl B:)