This is story painted a very good picture of the scene i just wish it had somehow resolved maybe i was waiting for a punchline or something.
nice story though
welcome to ficly
oh yeah get a pic.

I’m not sure if i agree with Mighty joe that it needs some sort of resolution. As the whole purpose seems to paint a scene of depression and despair.

the sentence “Unfortunately for Robin, love wasn’t.” seems like an edited sentence that lost it’s meaning. I just feels like a half a thought, that’s out of place.

BTW, make Might Joe happy and get a pic. oh, and welcome to ficly.

Yeah, I’m still trying to figure out whether Robin’s wife loves him or not. The paragraph seems to say that she both does and doesn’t, and that confuses me.

D’oh! Thanks for pointing out that I messed up an edit. The sentence was originally complete, and I must have deleted part of it as I was writing and forgot to go back to it.

Thanks for the welcome. I’ll work on the pic soon.