oh this is gritty i was kind of a little confused at the end but i probably shouldnt have commented so fast and waited for someone else to figure out where i got confused hehehe

aim small, miss small. You hit center mass on this one (and cleared up the vagueness of my story!). I love how she refuses to be a victim again.

Yeah, I liked the prequels that were written. I felt like his survival needed to be justified and rectified.

Took me a minute…okay, the whole thing, to follow that you jumped from one time to a time just before (range vs. meeting with detective). Other than that jump, I liked the story flow and the idea here. Certainly depicts one version of healing.

yeah i had to read twice, but i got it, go girl with your shooting!

Yeah, i love that she’s all proactive and doesn’t wanna be victimized again.

To me the jump felt like she was playing the conversation through again in her head.