I cheated too. If you can’t spot it then you are not worthy.

Nice job of the frantic nature and sometimes absurdly narrow focus of war. The last bit especially got really hard to follow, but I’m assuming that’s cause you were using song lyrics. For most of it you pulled off slipping them in and playing it off as parts of statements or drug-induced musing, but the ending just wound up confusing or contrived.

yeah i find war this confusing too. :) i like the short one-word statements, it’s as if the action is so noisy and fast paced, there isn’t time for a whole sentence.

Ah yes. I should have known it would be Metallica. Very nice. I saw you cheat, why’d you do it?

Ha like the cheat, thumbs up for that.