I’m afraid the tags probably tell you more than the story.

He pulled his lips away from hers, and had a million mouths.
This is beautiful line pure poetry.

oh they meet! and it seems to be a centering of the whole universe.

Bizarre and not what I was expecting. I was split on the repetition of ‘one million’, effective vs. redundant, but I think that’s a personal thing. Neat idea, and I think I got it straight in my head.

I was concerned about the redundancy, THX, but in the end I felt it better to have too much than not enough. This is one of those situations where I think all the ‘one million’s would work a lot better with more space to play around in.

Really nice. The “millions question” is a good one, I would have had a tough choice on trying to get the same effect.

I saw this more as a metaphor-maybe he’s used to playing a role?-but I really enjoyed it all the same.