Brutal. I really like the twist of it being a bait and trap situation, especially since I’d been a bit worried/incredulous about the ad that seemed to communicate so much and such vulnerability. Trying to put my finger on something. I think it wound up a bit quick, or maybe I’m overthinking details, which I do a lot.
I’m kind of torn about whether you should draw it out more and have her go all torture-tastic on his ass, or just drop him the moment he’s recognized with an efficient double tap to the skull…either way great reversal…I kind of feel like the “yes, it’s me” is a bit superfluous…maybe just taze his ass as soon as he recognizes her…
THX 0477
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