this would be reeeally sweet and a whole lot easier to read if you had pressed the caps lock button around about the first letter.

It’s been proven that it takes the brain longer to read/process things written in all caps. So, it does make it hard to read. You added some extra letters at the end of some words, which is also kind of distracting.

Other than that, I think this is something a lot of people can relate to. I can relate to someone making me feel that way, so reading this gave me a twinge in my heart, which is technically good because it means you evoked some emotions in a reader. Good work!