Cute ending, and it even fits the traditional model of a haiku, there being a bit of a change of direction or twist in the last line. (Oh, and since we’ve been debating the rating system lately, I thought I’d throw out there that I don’t rate poetry, just cause I consider myself an entirely unworthy judge.)
`spacetowrite
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)
THX 0477