Nice twist ending after a consistently, carefully written piece. I actually felt like a teenage girl going to prom.
One typo in first paragraph, “…on top on my bed…”

Lol, did she order the wrong size?

no, she’s anorexic… she thinks she huge when in reality she’s incredibly skinny

ooooooooooo, she’s anorexic. definitly a great spin on the story.

ahh, I see. I thought from the start that she was an average sized girl wanting to fit into a size four, but when you say she’s anorexic it makes more sense. Like the part about her not working out as much as she wanted to, but having the dress be too big in the end.

Good story!

nice excitement build-up to the anti-climax. that the anorexia was not explicitly named makes the story interesting and forces the reader to think a bit.