Powerful stuff! It gives a sense of urgency and purpose to the main character, without giving much away in terms of the situation they are in, or the reason for their escape. Looking forward to the sequel :)

Beautifully nasty. You convey the energy of the piece really well, leaving me wanting more.

I’m too terrified to ponder what kind of raw flesh it was, largely because I think I know.

You’re asking many more questions than you’re answering, which is what you want to do at the start of the story.

Loving it.