the only thing i can say here is you mention two kinds of trees, green and dead, which is fine, but conflicting. I love the moss description, but I need more of the house!
More like haunted property. I do like the long run-on sentences although that second paragraph should be broken into two to continue the “one long sentence is a paragraph” thing that it looks like you’re going for. Your descriptions are spot on nonetheless.
ElshaHawk (LoA)
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