Haha. “Oh… snap! Mole” As the kids say these days.

I love this story. Big bonus for defying expectations.

i like this. well, not so much the ending. (although it is an interesting twist)

yeah i like this its a good story not much else to say about it.

nice twist! the first time I read the second sentence, I was a little confused, but then I realized the dew must have fallen from above from the branch the bird is sitting on. I guess it’s too early for me! yawns and stretches
Poor mole, he talked too much above ground.

Funny and kind of sad. It feels a bit like a morality tale to scold that sort of odd pride in being disabled that borders on being delusional about the whole situation.
Nice use of a $5 dollar word, but exoskeleton still felt out of place in mole’s little monologue.

I have always wanted to write a morality play, but alas, I am not Aesop.
I appreciate the critiques and will take them to heart.
I have an idea for one called “The Porpoise with a Purpose.”